Q5: Feedback from others

Feedback

Dane-I really liked how you presented the shots especially when the camera cuts over Kieran's shoulder and you can see Jon-Jo. Also I liked how the music fits into the scene but a negative could be you couldn't really hear Jon-Jo and Kieran speak so sound is something you could improve on.


Dan W- I think you presented the 180 degree rule very well because it didn't confuse us, however the two actors didn't look at each other so it wasn't very professional. Also I liked the two shots over the shoulder so it looked like the two actors knew they were going to meet and it created some tension.


Dan H- I liked how you presented the match-on-action, to say it was your fist time I think it went really well and how the music fits with you coming out the door. Alternatively, there was problems with continuity, like with Jon-Jo's jeans and the lighting which I'm sure will get improved next time.